Magazine production

 

I have continued editing my second front cover, adding more cover lines to create convergence between the contents page and the front cover. I have also made the barcode smaller which was recommended to me within my feedback on my first draft.

Footage

 

I have shot some more footage to use on my website. My model is wearing a band t-shirt with The Smiths for intertextuality within my website.

Website production

 

I have edited my promotional section and welcome section on my website to be more visually interesting. I decided to make the text bigger saying 'this issue is here' to attract audience engagement, I have included a picture of the tote bag, which I have made bigger so that it is easier for audiences to see.

I chose to remove the background on the image of Bea as I found it difficult to make the text stand out on the image.

I have also made the masthead bigger at the top of my website.

Website production

I have added to my website, editing an image by adding filters. This will be used in connection with my 30 second audio-visual clip on my website under the 'fashion' tab.

First Draft Feedback

Targets:

• Tote bag is difficult to see on website
• On audio-visual, brand logo and slogan need to be different font sizes
• Add competition to website for interactivity
• Add QR code and social media info to contents pages
• Add section names on contents pages (eg. 'fashion', 'beauty')
• Include dynamic element on website
• Use anchoring text over large images on contents pages
• Make 'Shop the collection' title on website larger
• Increase brightness on opening photo on website
• Add advertising for boots in audio-visual on website - 'buy here'
• Forward-facing front cover of Bea works better 
• Make barcode smaller on Bea's front cover
• Add more content to home tab
• Make font on website bolder
• Make masthead bigger on website
• Reduce 'cover look' section on contents pages 

Intertextuality

Front Cover 1

"fall in love again and again" - lyric from 'Everything is romantic' by Charli XCX featuring Caroline Polachek

Contents 1

"maybe romance is a place" - lyric from 'Romance' by Fontaines D.C.

"mascara on diamond eyes" - references to songs 'Mascara' and 'Diamond Eyes' (along with album of the same name) by Deftones

"on Wednesdays we wear leopard print" - 'on Wednesdays we wear pink' line from Mean Girls  

"just you wait" - lyric from Alexander Hamilton from the Hamilton soundtrack

"oh boy..." - lyric from 'Manchild' by Sabrina Carpenter

Front Cover 2

"the life of a showgirl" - album by Taylor Swift

Contents 2

"the summer I wore jerseys and jorts" - reference to 'The Summer I Turned Pretty'

"you said you liked my hair" - lyric from 'Apple Cider' by beabadoobee

"winter is coming" - line from Game of Thrones 

"I wish I knew how to quit you" - line from Brokeback Mountain

First draft

https://cuthbertbeau.wixsite.com/etoile