Website production

 

 I have been developing my page on Fontaines DC, linked to one of my article titles in my "top stories" section.

I have added basic information about the concert including the lineup and setlist. I am considering adding a Spotify link to this. 

I have also added encouragement for audience interaction by providing an email address for readers to send concert photos to for a chance for their photos to be featured on the website.

Website production

 I have added more photos of my models in different outfits which I aim to use for "outfit breakdowns".

I am going to use this section to encourage my audience to buy/wear outfits worn by the models.

Magazine production

 

I have continued editing my second front cover, adding more cover lines to create convergence between the contents page and the front cover. I have also made the barcode smaller which was recommended to me within my feedback on my first draft.

Footage

 

I have shot some more footage to use on my website. My model is wearing a band t-shirt with The Smiths for intertextuality within my website.

Website production

 

I have edited my promotional section and welcome section on my website to be more visually interesting. I decided to make the text bigger saying 'this issue is here' to attract audience engagement, I have included a picture of the tote bag, which I have made bigger so that it is easier for audiences to see.

I chose to remove the background on the image of Bea as I found it difficult to make the text stand out on the image.

I have also made the masthead bigger at the top of my website.

Website production

I have added to my website, editing an image by adding filters. This will be used in connection with my 30 second audio-visual clip on my website under the 'fashion' tab.

First Draft Feedback

Targets:

• Tote bag is difficult to see on website
• On audio-visual, brand logo and slogan need to be different font sizes
• Add competition to website for interactivity
• Add QR code and social media info to contents pages
• Add section names on contents pages (eg. 'fashion', 'beauty')
• Include dynamic element on website
• Use anchoring text over large images on contents pages
• Make 'Shop the collection' title on website larger
• Increase brightness on opening photo on website
• Add advertising for boots in audio-visual on website - 'buy here'
• Forward-facing front cover of Bea works better 
• Make barcode smaller on Bea's front cover
• Add more content to home tab
• Make font on website bolder
• Make masthead bigger on website
• Reduce 'cover look' section on contents pages