Magazine production

 I have changed the position of my masthead and made some edits to my original photo.

Magazine production

 I have began creating my first front cover. I still need to add my cover lines and edit the placement of my masthead.

Magazine production

 

I have reshot some of my photos and have uploaded these, ready to use within my final product.

Research

 

I have looked at some Vogue front covers to get a better sense of the 'high end' element of the brief which I feel I have not met with the photos I have taken. I feel that some of my current photos are appropriate for the website, but not fitting for the front cover of my magazine. I am going to reshoot my photos in the coming weeks.

I will also need to reshoot my audio/visual as my current video is too long 

Flatplans

 

NEA Pitch feedback

 Teacher Feedback

    "Good choice of audience profile and focus group.

    Seth's cover ideas look appropriate if you have found men's magazines all feature actors, imagine him        as an actor.

    Lots of case study research done - well done this should inform your ideas well.

    Lots of ideas for website.

    30 seconds - daily routine - need to make it style related."

From these suggestions, I will likely move forward with Seth's role in my magazine as an actor. I will do a 'favourite pieces in my wardrobe' segment for my 30 second audio/visual.

Focus Group  Feedback

The majority of my focus group said they preferred masthead 1 - Étaile in the font 'Lucy Rose' from Adobe fonts which I should be able to access through photoshop - so I will progress with this masthead.

My focus group have also recommended I present Seth as an actor or musician.

They have also suggested that I ensure my ideas follow the conventions of a style magazines, with some advising I focus further on fashion.

One member of my focus group advised that I use a bright colour scheme for Cover 2 which I will experiment with.

From further research, I have discovered that my magazine should be titled “étoile” in order to translate to star. Therefore, to convey the correct message to my audience about the content of the magazine, I will be changing my masthead to this. 

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